Replying to So my friend wrote this poem...
I was wondering what evryone thought about it. She did it pretty quickly, so dont hate:
I take my first step out into a different world
fresh powder dusts the mountain like a (insert word here, she couldnt think of one)
the cold brisk winter air takes my breath
every muscle in my body anxious to move
releasing the pressure of my day
here i can relax, there are no distractions.
my whole world changes
i feel free to explore this world that is mine
as i take my first step
thats it thats all.
let me know what you think
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