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im about to make this mic short circut/your styles whack as fuck/ so this shit fits you perfect/ ive got so many ways to dis you that im playful with you/ ill let this razor slit you so that they have to staple stitch you/ and everybody in this fuckin place will miss you if you try to turn my facial tissue into a racial issuse/no bodys hearin you your a whack liar/ there all your white jokes just back fired/cause bitch your walkin up the wrong creek/ there go tell all your boys you were beat by a honkey/ i dont give a fuck ill kill ya/ bitch you better regonize me like i look familiar
steezier than a bucket of steeze from kentucky fried steeze
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Cut out some of the needless vulgarity to tighten it up a bit, it will sound better...
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keep up the good work wigger
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The Jews invented tornados.
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Last night at east coast movie tour in NY Mcmurray dropped some nice rhymes, it was hot.
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not bad. A way I like to do it is use the rhymes to tell a story.. Like poetry.. not so much 'I'm the baddest gangster of them all. I'll kill you'
Try to find new ways to say it.. Here's an example of a rhyme I put together on here a little while back.
I'm surrounded by tools,
And I'm not in a shed.
Sinister thoughts race through my head.
A cathedral lined with skulls
The story yet untold
Ressurrected on wings of a sparrow,
Once again will return the pharoah.
A day when all hell shall unfold.
Bow before the pharoah of this land,
For it is I who will be your king,
Rebels will succumb to the mighty sting,
Scorpion will crawl as you fall to the sand.
Alone in a deserted village
Middle school freestylers eaten alive,
Pitiful rhymes quick to nose dive
May-day may-day! Accept the pillage.
Learn to admit defeat,
Live underground with moles,
Forsake your family jewels,
I will snatch- then I'll eat.
Allow me to mezmerize as I prophecize
the forthecoming of the ostracize,
- everyone dies in a spiral downsize,
spies captivate guys and the size-mograph lies,
Supervize, televize, the moneywize
highs and lows, populous is suprized as
America is supersized; it's Prized
the enterprize, franchize burst.
seen with my eyez, boats capsized.
this prophecy men despize.
Written upon ancient scrolls
Tainted words caused bloodshed
Eyes open in bed, what have I said?
Life has its lulls, and certainly its fools.
Was this all just a thought in my head?
Eat. Sleep. Breathe. Ski.
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word to your mother
The only tent i'm pitchin tonite is... well you get where i'm goin.... OH! (Quagmire)
Frontflips are lame
Lets hear it for fat chicks!
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i feel black now thanks
When life hands you lemons, ask for tequila and salt
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half those rhymes are ripped. then u can tell the shit he wrote cuz they are weak and he rhymes you with you and then you again. it goes from ok, to horrible, to ok, to horrible
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skiinstead man, until you put up something better, either give props or dont. yeah, what the guy said above, drop some of the useless filler cussing and it will be better. jarrett, that is a pretty tight for a little white guy :)
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ok hold on lemme write something...
you bout to feel my rush/so real, it could be touched/ i aitn gonna spit too much/ just enuff/ my shits lethal/ paralyze mc's like they in cuffs/ they try to hate me cuz im new in this game/ just wait im bout to be in da fuckin hall o fame/ u don't know my name?/ cuz i just came from atl/ so hot/ like the gates of hell/ keep tryin bitch but you fuckin weak/ i just gave you a little sneak peak/of my abilities/ of my agiliteis/ are ya feelin me?
man i smashed yer girl/ while she wearin pearls/ like june cleaver/ yer rhymes sound like da beaver/ this is just a teaser/ not a pleaser/ u never gonna beat me/ wannabe me/ but u never compete/ u can't defeate/ me/ yer rhymes are whack/ so i pick up da slack/ knock u wit my mac/ im gonna attack/ hit u in da back/ make u bleed/ make you pleed/ fo ya life/ to come home to ya kids and wife
ok this faggot named spiclord/ i cut him up/ cuz im sharp like a nice sword/ he cant even compete/ or stand da heat/ or even complete/ a rhyme/ i be sellin mine/ on a casseste deck/ why u foldin? we havn't even bet yet/ i hope u never forget..
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and all that shit is my own^^^^ atleast i don't rip my shit from real artists
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linconloopwannabe 'that was pretty tight for a little white guy'
hahaha
that was one of the funniest things ever.
Eat. Sleep. Breathe. Ski.
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check it check it...
every day there is a struggle/me and harry potter dont wanna haggle with no muggle/everybody on this site is white/why u lookin to start a fight/u know i just might/whether im rhymin or spittin' im talking shit to ya mother/yea u heard this like no otha'/dont fuck with me/cause i'll take you downtown and show u how to get beat/i was skiing this bigass line and hit it in the backseat/i tried but i didnt land on my feet/too bad i went home and sucked on ya mama's teet's/type on ya' calculator, but dont holla at me cause im a playa'/ i strike when i like/don't get to hype/it dont matter if im wrong or right/ im ready to fight/ so go fly a kite mother fucker.....word
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my shit is ill, we gotta have a freestyle battle go down on ns.com we beastly
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my shit is ill, we gotta have a freestyle battle go down on ns.com we beastly
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i like it up the ass/my boyfriend hopes i dont have gas
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ahh this retarded kid in my health class and i battle. but he is really stupid and he is fat so half the time he doesnt know what the hell is going on. he grunts alot during his ryhmes and most of them are just profanity like 'i fucked your mother', i just laugh at him
what you gonna do when shit hits the fan, are you gonna stand and fight like a man, will you be as hard as you say you are, are you gonna run and go get your bodygaurd
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aahhha that's not original, maker of this thread. i downloaded that same freestyle from kazaa like a year ago. it's biggy smalls.
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i already said that^^^ he rips all his shit and u can tell wuts his and wuts not cuz his shit sucks and is horrible and the good shit is way outta his league. bitch quit tryin to be sumtin yer not
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i like spooks
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its deffinmatly not biggie, why would he say he was white? you stupid fuck im not some poser who rips off other peoples songs,
steezier than a bucket of steeze from kentucky fried steeze
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um... honkey no, and you used the word 'you way to much', other than that its decent but me and my boys could kill you anyday we just sit and rhymed all last year in school
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uhh you^ cannot beat him, sorry
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Only 8 lines, still three fucks and two bitches. All about dissing. No matter if you ripped it, that shit has been written million times.
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