here's a piece i wrote. its kinda long, but it happens.
thoughts? critiques? responses (lyrical perhaps)?
yo bring the noise and raise your voice
sing for your freedom its the time to rejoice
destroy all the hatred and the prejudice
we're searchin for the truth and we're seekin justice
searchin for conceivable and credible sources
im here to make you question higher powers and forces
is jesus an anthropomorphization?
of the sun, like Horus, of the Egyptian nation
but basing, your beliefs, off what you hear
is like dressing how, you're supposed to appear
like running from what, you're supposed to fear
in a peaceful oblivion as the end draws near
im saying the condition of our race is critical
and if you dont believe me your just being cynical
egotistically spirtual despite all the evidence
cause the prevalence of miracles aint worth a second guess
we've been focusing too much on the medical
and not enough on the natural and credible
an analytical visual corrupting your mind
until you recognize the message as strictly subliminal
strictly statistical strictly metaphysical
this is the age of pisces, but it isnt the pinnacle
the ideas i express arent solely political
but everything you hear is completely original
so move on with your ritual but dont miss a syllable
of the words that you hear, strategically minimal
i present to you my lyrical creation
adressing the issues of a satirical nation
using racism and hate to build the foundation
erasing the marks that obscure explanations
but theres no obligation to look past the lies
the extent of your freedoms for you to decide
to apply and deny and follow your passions
to live and fit in and vary your accents
spit for the world, rock it right off its axis
stealin your soul faster than fascists
ive never been the type to follow all the latest fashions
checkin girls at restaurants leaving digits on the napkins
dont stress out on life, just wait and see what happens
dont get busy worryin when you ought to be relaxing
theres nothing you can change about previous infractions
just chill and appreciate some of lifes abstractions
some of lifes distractions some of lifes attractions
i do a lot of stupid shit but dont regret my actions
all across the atlas, spreading the hope of truth
hope to preserve our earth to pass unto our youth
chasing a world full of life with death in hot pursuit
save the earth for all its worth, theres no reason to pollute
and you really cant dispute the lack of care involved
in helping out our mother nature til her forests are absolved
of acid rain and loggers chains a conflict unresolved
left to die, is this right? after all we have evolved
civil disobedience, non-violent resolutions
until the tension grows and grows and causes revolution
primal instincts brought to life surviving execution
war and hatred escalating, unnatural evolution
imminent retribution, for liars and for thieves
cause when everything collapses in honest men will lead
don't give money to the war til people have what they need
all races should be treated equal, everybody freed
peace, love, and life, over ignorance and greed
everyone deserves their pride and a right to believe
ill die fighting on my feet before i live on my knees
they say that im sick, but this aint a disease
my expertise wont extend beyond issues that matter
cause thats where i focus, on controversial disasters
commercialized task force so you think it'll be fine
but new orleans is still in ruin since 2005
on the news for a week or two then out of the publics eye
forgotten, left to rebuild and redesign
civilizations in decline, along with humanity
we got 5th graders fighting and using profanity
this is insanity, and sometimes it leaves me speechless
the lack of care and education, some kids can't even read this
so heed this warning, this is a plea to the people
educate your mind, stop following the feeble
dont waste a life, a gift, on empty drugs and needles
clear the human race of ignorance, this is the greatest evil