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landonn
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tell me what you think of it this edit, how can my skiing improve.

Jun 3 2008 9:12PM
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dave44
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try to throw some grabs in there

Jun 3 2008 9:17PM
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tBatt
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pretty solid, is that atmosphere?
id say try holding your grabs longer, adn whats with all the still frames at the end?
Jun 3 2008 9:23PM
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Malcolm
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really sick
Jun 3 2008 9:26PM
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JuliusJ
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not bad, i liked the skiing, but i don't like the music. music is key to any good edit. and agreed with the guy above, try grabbing more. and one last, shaky and pointless shots aren't really necessary.
Jun 3 2008 9:26PM
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landonn
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word, my friend just got into filming this winter and his shots kept getting better and now we're doing more filming skating and biking and his mom just got him a hd camera.  we're going to camp soon and we should have a pretty badass edit from there. i will throw down my best tricks and hopefully have a sick edit.
Jun 3 2008 9:30PM
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Franny
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Nice tramp
Jun 3 2008 9:32PM
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Alex_G
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You look solid dude, I bet you will get grabs in your 7's by the end of next season and 9's and 10's just keep killin it and you should do fine. maybe also separated the tramp and the skiing segments into 2 edits.

Jun 3 2008 9:52PM
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.jr
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ya I agree with the guys above.. get your camera man a tri pod or get a new camera man, and as far as skiing and tramps in the same edit.. I kinda felt like it didnt flow, maybe you could try something like you learning the trick on the tramp and then after that have you throwing the trick on snow??
Jun 3 2008 10:02PM
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sirskizalot
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sick
Jun 3 2008 10:06PM
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VT_scratch
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hahah.



pretty solid skiing though. like everyone said, explore more grabs and stuff but your rotations are solid
Jun 3 2008 10:07PM
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Ahmets_Brother
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nice, dont take offense to any of this, just things to help you with your progression since you asked:

-Different grabs- you have the trucks decent, but the other grabs arent fully developed or not a ton of variety. Your tail grabs could be grabbed at the very end and cross more, tweaking stuff more. That whole bit

-Different axis- you can work on mistys, bios,flatspins/rodeos. right now your doing backflipish/underflip things, straight spins, and some kinda corked out stuff. You can work on these other types of rotations

-Switch spins

-rails- many things you can work on, as it is the same for all of us!

but those are just a few things. Keep shreddin
Jun 3 2008 10:09PM
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ButteredToast.
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Try to realllllly hold those grabs solid untill you can see your landing, then let them go and stomp.
Jun 3 2008 10:15PM
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pavel
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one of the best tricks for skating is: do very simple things for many years

then one day it will be all kinds of sense for you, and you will be really pleased style at all you do, and you can get very fast at learning and have great style with no conditions

if you do just simple like 540 and rails for 2 years and do not try to be anything with style, you will one day become very good very rapidly and have great style!
Jun 3 2008 10:17PM
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ButteredToast.
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Excuse his bad english he is russia.


Sorry I thought that was funny
Jun 3 2008 10:20PM
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pavel
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yes, it is well understood what i said under there when someone told me many weeks ago

i leave it because it was funny mistakes, i am not ashamed
Jun 3 2008 10:27PM
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ButteredToast.
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Haha, good, it gave me a good laugh
Jun 3 2008 10:38PM
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FellowJibber
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i just listened to this song the other day. its by atmosphere
Jun 3 2008 10:40PM
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skiRay
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that was really good. i enjoyed it. and sick doubles. also, i have that same red oakley set up, so i liked that too
Jun 3 2008 10:57PM
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landonn
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yeah man, thanks for the tips.  i can do rodeo 7's and 9's but not 5's. i learned rodeos in the park one day and my friend didnt have his cameran and since i couldn't do rodeo 5's, i went for one and flipped to much and kinda did like a one and half rodeo's and landed on my back and got scared. im over the fear now and will film rodeo's/ bios at camp and  try to get misty's

Jun 3 2008 11:10PM
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landonn
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bump
Jun 4 2008 12:42AM
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