so i know that there have been a lot of photo critique threads in here, but just thought i might throw a video critique in here. and please i know im still learning and am a little rough around the edges, but just let me know what you think and how i could improve that would be good. thanks.
edits:
http://vimeo.com/999285
http://vimeo.com/841278
http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=-8080748341289658049
http://media.nscdn.com/uploads/member/videos/1200749229stevensyoutube1.mov