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I need POEM PEOPLE!

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KRASHED
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Can anyone write a quick poem (free verse) that includes the words lock, neurology, polt foot, practiced, reengage, spirits, sierra leone, subject, valley, and web?

I've already written one pretty good one but I can't seem to pull together a second one. I won't steal your ideas I just need to see how other people approach this kind of stuff. Thanks and +++Karma in advance to anyone who puts some effort into it.

O ya each on of the words can only be used once, there are 10 words so there should only be ten lines with one word used as the anchor in each.
Apr 23 2008 9:14PM
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Kitzrow
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polt foot?
Apr 23 2008 9:20PM
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MADmidwest
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is it supposed to be like a poem for like high school that doesn't have to be proper and can just be like rhyming words or is it supposed to be like proper and for a literature class
Apr 23 2008 9:23PM
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KRASHED
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it is a high school class free verse, fairly short sentences and half assed thought.
Apr 23 2008 9:24PM
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Dylan_
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roses are red, violets are blue, i like spaghetti, ya wanna screw ?
Apr 23 2008 9:24PM
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chrismoJBEATS
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lock, neurology, polt foot, practiced, reengage, spirits, sierra leone, subject, valley, and web


Spirits of the sierra leone lay in the valley.
The subject of freedom locked out.
No practice of neurology, no browsing the web.
Most suffer, polt foot ridden.
Can we reengage their lives?


IDK

im pretty good at poetry but this was hard, hope that helped
Apr 23 2008 9:39PM
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KRASHED
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fantastic that's just the kind of inspiration I needed, I wanted to work off the idea of Sierra Leones war torn history.

+Karma!

Any other ideas?
Apr 23 2008 9:41PM
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Dylan_
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sorry, i didint even read the thread,i had to take a shit so i didint read and wrote that, my bad man
Apr 23 2008 9:43PM
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Kitzrow
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haha no idea what this is

I's a nervous fucking wreck, Googled up some neurology
Did about as much good as a subject major scientology
God put me on my own tonight, gotta get some spirts in me
I'm at the bottom of a valley with snipers on both sides
Practiced in all sects of murder but  I don't know this time
Just a fly in a web, the number up's mine
I be a renegade soldier trapped behind enemy lines
Trigger fingers on lock, calibrated fine
Just another worthelss street soul
Journying back up tonight

Apr 23 2008 9:48PM
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MADmidwest
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There was an eternal lock on my head
Dr. of Neurology had though me to be dead
Spirits were low but life soon was over
I am now a renegade to show her
The web once trapped fell
No longer in a dark valley of hell
The subject on my mind lightened
The way I practiced my life brightened
Now I find myself in the Sierra leone
by myself dying alone

I just went right through and wrote this in about 5 minutes without any idea what I was going to write so it might not make sense but it might give you an idea. You can turn it in too if you want to half ass things, i don't care. I don't know what poll foot is either so i couldn't put it in

Apr 23 2008 9:49PM
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Kitzrow
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hahaha reengage, I thought it was renegade
Apr 23 2008 9:49PM
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