Drawing help/critique (pics inside)

oh i forgot to add, this was done with a mechanical .7 mm # 2 pencil. also, my camera kinda bends images. you can see if you look down by the edge of the sketchbook- it kinda curves, so keep that in mind.

50 cent.

thats pretty good, the only thing i'd work on is the right eye, i find its the only element that kinda brings it down

yep

also, i havent really worked too much on the right side of the face, but when i do ill definatly post it to see wha tpeople have to say. thanks for the input though

ya. it makes it look like he has down syndrome with that right eye. Other than that, it looks good

 the ear is kind of pointy. but it looks good

If you go to an art store and get a set of drawing pencils it'll turn out a lot nicer.  The H pencils are harder and lighter, and the B pencils are softer and darker.  Mess around with those and see what they do--it will bring a lot more life to your drawings.

his ear is screwed up yo. rethink the depth of it.

left cheek smile line looks a little droppy maybe.  meant to be constructive criticsm, it looks good

I'd say if you are just sketching around, try out some charcoal.

thats pretty good man for a beginner thats awsome its just 50 cent kind of looks meaner, i dont know how to explain it more rugged i guess? more gorilla like because of his shot to the cheek

looks good but dont use a mechanical pencil and make your darks darker 

People hate to much. thats really good for a beginner.

Did you smudge it with your finger at all?

Not a single person that responded yet has said anything negative that wasn't helpful lol...

 The hat is really good and I could tell it was 50 cent but the eyes are a little weird looking but overall its good a drawing

oh i forgot thats nice man i wish i had any kind of artistic talent. props

thats a great drawing for soemone just starting. you made the ear way too small though.
Here are some guidelines thatt help you draw faces, since everyone's features are in roughly the same places:
eyes are  halfway between bottom of chin and top of head
bottom of nose is halfway between eyes and bottom of chin
center of mouth is halfway between bottom of nose and bottom of chin.
top of ears are usu. level with corners of eyes, bottom of earlobes level with center of mouth.

It helps if you just draw light lines first where everything roughly is, so you have a reference while ur drawing. I usually just have a thing taht looks something like this:
                                                      ______

                                                      
                                                    
                                               -   __        __    -
                                                    
                                                          _
                                               -        __           -
                                                     ______


It also helps if you build up shaded areas before hard lines, because if you do shaded areas first, it brings out the shape of teh skull underneath, and then you fill in details after

skiPEI's info will def help you out. keep everything he said in mind for sure. also there is an eyewidth between the two eyes, measuring with your pencil helps alot. idk if you know what i mean when i say that, but just another suggestion.

with shading, i used to be addicted to smudging. each year as i went through school, my teachers were critical towards shading by smudging. it was hard for me to get out of it, but the shading you can achieve by putting different amounts of pressure on your pencil, i can almost guarantee, will always look better.

good luck, looks good so far.
--try making the ear a bit bigger, and really study eyes. that's the hardest part in making a person easy to identify.