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Short Film! Formula 50!

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mski
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So we had an Arts Festival the other day and I decided to create a short thats kind of a rought draft of a long version of a commercial for vitamin water. I didnt include logos or anything, but i was just looking to get feedback on this to see if you thought it might work as a good commericial.

Peep it!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M5sLp9y26nE
May 11 2007 12:11PM
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Ericpbp
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it was alright. better camera maybe.  I thought it was pretty funny though when he caught him
May 11 2007 12:16PM
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mski
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Yah, i try to get the best quality out of my camera. I just cant afford GL2 or vx1000. I have a sony DCR 950, its 3ccd so the quality isnt to bad.

some shots in that film were high 8 tho.
May 11 2007 12:38PM
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STACKS
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mski your the man
May 11 2007 2:37PM
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dozerr
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me gusta
May 11 2007 3:11PM
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Tom.
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pretty sweet.

I hate vitamin water though.
May 11 2007 3:32PM
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Jeff_Lo
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pretty cool, but sometimes when you had a different angle the color was incredibally off or different, deffinately would reccomend getting more angles and getting even more creative with your cinematography.
May 11 2007 3:33PM
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