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hobbes
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My friend and I recently made an Anti-Smoking commercial for a contest. You gusy can be the test auidence. Please tell me what you thin of it. be completly honest.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X63lGT0g84s
Feb 15 2007 8:53PM
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timmi
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defenetly sends a strong message. well done.

Feb 15 2007 9:10PM
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oakjewlery
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very unprofessional but good thing
Feb 15 2007 9:46PM
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wAy2sTeEzY4u
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LOLOLOL what a pussy OMGZZZZZZ
Feb 15 2007 9:48PM
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eheath
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Cliche, won't win it for you.
Feb 15 2007 9:50PM
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~*LoLa*~
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awe thats sad...but brings the point across. good job
Feb 15 2007 9:50PM
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georgemihaly
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Message comes across alright, camera work is shaky (use a tripod) and when the kid is talking by the grave mic him up, i had to play the thing over a few times before i understood what he was saying
Feb 15 2007 10:10PM
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hobbes
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thanks guys.

yeah, we didn't have a tripod at the time, so you know. If we win, it get's shown across Canada on T.V. so keep your eyes open for it.
Feb 16 2007 4:35PM
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OhioRiderSPK5
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man that was a strong message... i really didnt know what that box was the kid pulled out of the purse until i seen him put it on the grave but good job though
Feb 16 2007 4:41PM
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tBatt
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that pretty much sums it u for me
Feb 16 2007 4:49PM
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guava
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i think it's pretty arrogant of you to infer that smokers are stupid.
Feb 16 2007 5:03PM
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grams.
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well...
Feb 16 2007 9:10PM
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Dilla
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that was a very good commercial, definitely sends a strong message.
Feb 16 2007 9:48PM
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TylerS
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thats actually very good, the music makes it perfect
Feb 16 2007 9:51PM
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guava
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huh? i dont get what you're trying to say.

smoking is a personal decision, if people don't want to smoke that's great...especially because its a healthy decision not to smoke. however if someone chooses to smoke let them be because it's their decision to do so. there's no need for people creating anti-smoking ads to shove their own views down other people's throats and guilt trip them into not smoking. When you're of age to buy cigarettes you're an adult and can make your own dam decisions, good or bad, wright or wrong.

Now if you made a commercial advocating not smoking in public places because it affects non-smokers that would actually be nice because it's extremely obnoxious when smokers do that. but if a person wants to smoke where it doesn't bother anyone then that's their own business not yours.
Feb 16 2007 11:37PM
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grams.
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i get what you're saying but people can also make stupid decisions, whether its an adult or kid so in my opinion starting to smoke is a stupid decision making the ppl who do it not very smart/stupid.. i do understand though that once you get addicted your pretty fucked and its really hard to quit also
Feb 17 2007 8:14AM
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bangarangmules
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good job to your friend
Feb 17 2007 9:23AM
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derick
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props to ya thats pretty good
Feb 17 2007 9:24AM
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