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Kinda Corny I Know (for Girls)
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idk im in a wierd state of mind right now bc of something i cant really say but i just ended up i know this is probably for the ladiesmen cult but i wanted to ask girls strait up would u like this if a guy sent this to u
Slowly colapsing beneath the weight of everything i built with these god forsaken hands tell me you love me kiss me give me a smile that ill never forget be my solution be my everything be my savior ill lay you down ill make sure youll never stop smiling ill make everything go away just as long as you be who you are and be that person for me and love me and save me for as long as i do the same for you everything you have given me will be cherished everything i have givin you can be forgotten all i want to remember is your love and your eyes your spirit and how it fills me up more and more each second rising with nothing to lose little to gain but wanting your love more than anything ill keep you safe from heartbreak if you keep me from sufforing ill keep you in my heart if you keep me in yours ill die tonight but come back for you tomorrow my sweet sweet love... never change.
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If I was a chick, i'd probably stop talking to you and be creeped out...
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.......HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
but seriously man thats weird. and very creepy. gotta keep the pimp hand strong.
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My reaction would depend on if you were just a random guy or my boyfriend. I would probably flip my shit, just cause committment scares me and this would run me off, but if you have a serious relationship with her, then by all means, go for it.
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wow seriously why would u think i would send this a random girl fuck i mean i wanna send it to this girl i like and ya i know i gotta keep my pimp hand strong but shes dealt with to many assholes i wanna be the one thats kinda different
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and btw she def. knows i like her and i know for sure she likes me back its just somethin to Woo her and btw it worked she loved it and i now have a gf =)
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umm if you just like her and aren't in a fairly serious relationship with her this would probably freak her out a bit.
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yea theres 2 reactions to this:
1. what the fuck im never talking to this weird kid again
2. your really sweet and i love you blah blah
thats it
50/50 chance
but seriously if you read it objectively it looks pretty gay
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Take it slow... This would run a lot of girls off if they're not your girlfriend, shit even if I was your girlfriend, this would run me off. Do something a little less intense that would let her know that you care and that you're differnt that the other guys that shes been with.
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read my other posts b4 u post i def. just got a gf and its not really a wierd thing ive known her for a while and she def. loved it a lot
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see i was right..theres no middle ground on that shit
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wow all of u r dumb seriously i just asked all of my friends what they think of it and they think its cool so u guys r pretty dam dumb im sorry to say and im officially sick of this site bc of the asshole so bye i quit i know no one will miss me bc im just a simple noob peace
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were their crabs because if so your gay
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theres nothing really emo about me i just clearly dont fit in with all of you youre all dicks to me the whole time even when im right about shit i just sick of u ppl especially a select few and you know who are
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easy killer. that was a bit intense bro, and all theyre giving is their opinion, chill. how old are you dude, i think thatd be more informative than threatening to quit ns. what would you like me to say? i love you no, please dont go! i mean for real, youre taking this too seriously.
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hahah, this is the best reason to leave NS ever. He asked for an opinion and we gave it to him and then he said we were wrong...
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no i mean period like for as long as ive been on this site ppl have been a dick to me and its gay and i really dont fit in with everyone im not like you ppl im a crazy impulsive wierd kid and some ppl laugh and others criticize and obviously most ppl here just criticize me i wrather be around the ppl that laugh like my friends and not get critcized about it this is just who i am im odd and ya i def. am a strait from the heart person and u know some girls like that stuff in my case she did and i have a gf bc of it now
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dude if u gonna leave then leave don't bitch at people cuz they gave their opinion. it kindof made me laugh tho how u were like im gining this site is gay ur never gonna hear from me again and thelike two posts later your back on and talking shit cuz ppl gave their opinion
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actually im talking to someone right now thats why i havent gotten off yet and im not bitching at the ppl who gave thier oppinion god damn you ppl are seriously dumb its not bc of this thread its bc i just got another messege from another fuckin asshole pretty much calling me a retard I JUST DONT FIT IN ill be gone in like 5 min when im done talking
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sorry dude you posted while I was typing calm downm and congrats
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DUDES , this kid is liek 14 give him a break. Your dumbass was in love with liek 4 girls when you were a kid (to the readers)dont make him cry
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ever heard of punctuation?
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its just very deep, and kind of heavy, i dont know about most girls but that sort of freaks me out in a relationship. but then again maybe im just used to being with guys who are not in touch with their sensitive side
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i think i just fell in love with you because your such a wordsmith
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Damn son, you're the next William Shakespeare. But keep in mind, Shakespeare died a virgin.
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Well I'll give you some hope and some advise.
One of my good friends liked a girl and figured they would be good together. They were kind of friends. So he wrote her up a note and dropped it in her mailbox with his number and stuff on it. Long story short...this was 6 years ago and they are living together now and will most likely be getting married.
However, I would maybe tone it down a little and just use normal speach. it does come off as a little 'emo'.
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But on the other hand it would make for some sweet lyrics.
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Thank god StarF*cker left, that kid was an idiot.
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That would take the shit out of me. hahaha just fucking weird.
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when it comes to this sort of thing, if your not a poet (your not) Id recommend using somebody elsees lines...try shakespearan sonnets if shes a nerd, some of pablo nerudas early stuff if shes not. At all costs avoid the illustrated william blake.
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as for me i read 2 words of it and got bored.. do something.. not so different? maybe it's just me
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mad balls for actually posting this on ns. u know youd get bashed. props.
yeah...this works.if you really like her..but it might be a bit on the heavy side...
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sorry about this people i really wasnt in a good state of mind last night and idk i just did shit that was very impulsive im not gunna say why i was in a bad state of mind but its really bad sorry everyone for the trouble i never sent that to a girl i actually didnt even write it for a girl i wrote it bc of the state of mind i was in and idk the original purpose of this post to see if it an ok poem thing
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I might actually take this seriously if I didn't know him, but I know he thinks he's the shit and fucks tons of hot chicks.
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Wooing, not seducing, but wooing, women with poetry is so 16th century.
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Just because she's had troubles in the past and you want to be different, doesn't mean that you have to say all the things you believe will make her smile and believe that you are something special(not saying you aren't something special to her). It's just that it's not always the things that you say to her, it's how you feel about her. I know those words are very expressive but, I'm getting the feel that you are just saying them because you are afraid of becoming just another guy that broke her heart. Well, saying things like that, and not meaning them, is going to hurt her even more. Just, make sure that what you say to her to express your feelings for her, are exactly how you are feeling inside. If not, it could cause huge confusion, and miscommunication as to what you both want or feel for eachother.
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HAHAHAHA wow
and by the way NS is not kindergarten and people arent politically correct...people say what their reaction is for the most part with no consideration to your feelings or with any intention of supporting you....youre gonna get an honest opinion and if you cant handle it then dont ask questions like this
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bahhahahaha emo kids are a waste of space
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my heart bleeds black too
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my heart is my heart and is NONE OF UR FUCKING BUISNESS... jp
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ok buddy just remember this is the INTERNET and unless u kno somebody persoanlly don't take anything to offense cause chances r you'll probably never see any of us in person so just chill. If u posted this in ladies men u probably would have gotten more constructive responses (if thts what u wanted).
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dude... i was asking girls and obviously i was just jokin just now couldnt u see the JP
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You have to stop going on NS when youre high, Seth. And who is this girl? And who are these friends you talk about?
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i wonder wat steph wood say
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i keep reading it halfway through and being like holy fuck! and then i forget where i was and have to start over again.
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too emo my man.....way too emo
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