Replying to The Weed Rap

ok i wrote this a few months ago and i finally typed it up today. its my rap all about the weed. its not that good yet but let me know what you think.

The Weed Rap

I love it every time I take a hit from the bong
As I listen to my favorite Bob Marley song
It’s such a great feeling to watch the chamber fill up
I hope I don’t get tested and forced to piss in a cup

Just picked up an eighth of some super fresh dank
With no need to worry cuz I got unlimited bank
Throw that shit inside by dubbla
Always love tokin’ out my wicked ill bubbla

The lungs feel great cuz of double percolation
And if things go wrong there’s always vaporization
I don’t give a fuck about the health concerns
So long as when I inhale the smoke don’t burn

Got some bad news now my deala’s in jail
This shits fucked up, now the popo’s on my trail
If I get caught, I’ll probly try and run
And since I’m always blazed, I’ll be as good as done

I may be dumb, but there’s always hooked on phonics
Who needs a job when you can push mad chronic
I got a 6 foota and I know wha’s good
Gotta know the rules when ya dealin’ in the hood

I hate all these rookies, frontin’ on my block
Might have to show em a thing or 2, might have to show em my glock
Next thing you know and its time to rip the gravity
Why you bogartin’ my bowl, whach you think this a charity?