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j.bird
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Here is my first piece, I put it up in about an hour and a half but I kept just sittin around and takin breaks while talkin to my buddies. Don't rip me to shreds, but constructive criticism is awesome. I normally just photog while my friends spray, but I took a shot at it. I know its super simple, only time can get more detail and can skills. here it is

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Apr 1 2006 1:53AM
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SteezePatrol
Posts: 10281 - Karma: 36
your going to jail. but I like the lettering
Apr 1 2006 2:28AM
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j.bird
Posts: 6680 - Karma: 15
yea
Apr 1 2006 2:33AM
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j.bird
Posts: 6680 - Karma: 15
jail? it's legal. but thanks mom
Apr 1 2006 2:33AM
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SteezePatrol
Posts: 10281 - Karma: 36
explain...
Apr 1 2006 2:33AM
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j.bird
Posts: 6680 - Karma: 15
it is part of my last name, with the letters re-arranged. I didn't want some stupid ass cliche name like "clubs" or "dives" there is like hella cats with almost the exact same name.
Apr 1 2006 2:35AM
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SteezePatrol
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still going to jail
Apr 1 2006 2:42AM
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Ski-hobo
Posts: 7121 - Karma: 15
so gay
Apr 1 2006 3:04AM
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Paul-o-Rama
Posts: 3301 - Karma: 13
try to make your letters more uniform and add shadow
Apr 1 2006 3:38AM
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ThaLorax
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no way dude, it's different and looks sick. don't even change it.
Apr 1 2006 3:43AM
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Leckett
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i think its pretty sweet
Apr 1 2006 9:23AM
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TannerCoulter.
Posts: 1713 - Karma: 111
saweet
Apr 1 2006 10:26AM
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bhill2.0
Posts: 6573 - Karma: 197
We have this spot behind a car dealership that we chill at alot and being a dumb fuck i just used BH or bhill sometimes. My friends all used there initials and stuff but they would just write like no graffitti just writing i guess. Now they have my name on file in the neighborhood it backs up into. The neighborhood has this oval street and then theres a fence with 6 pairs of shoes on the wires right above our spot then theres a trail to it. A cop could so easily go down there. Ive been thinking about making it all white, making a name and just goin nuts
Apr 1 2006 10:42AM
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Timmy_G
Posts: 3735 - Karma: 15
Wait is it Gerb like Gerber baby food? haha! I like the tag it is nice man.
Apr 1 2006 10:43AM
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timmi
Posts: 12874 - Karma: 3,460
gerrrrbbb!
Apr 1 2006 10:46AM
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j.bird
Posts: 6680 - Karma: 15
hahaha no, It's my a part of my last name with the letters rearranged. No one would ever get it, thats why i picked it.
Apr 1 2006 1:14PM
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futurespin
Posts: 2178 - Karma: 168
heres one my friend made, sorry about the bad quality its from a video...
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Apr 1 2006 1:50PM
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Paul-o-Rama
Posts: 3301 - Karma: 13
how do you know, i've been writing for two years
Apr 1 2006 7:47PM
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andrewg
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thats hella sick
Apr 1 2006 7:49PM
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j.bird
Posts: 6680 - Karma: 15
w3rd.

It's my first so I'm not worried about the 3d shit yet. More just keeping it clean and working on can control skills. I can draw fine, but can skills are a bitch. Once i get better I will start hittin up places other than my friends yard and this art wall. start getting up hah
Apr 1 2006 8:28PM
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Paul-o-Rama
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Click for larger image some sponsered skaters skated it right when it was drying, they came with liek two suitcases full of camera gear and started skating it and shooting pics and i was like fuck, its still wet, and they are like, so?
Apr 2 2006 3:45AM
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justski
Posts: 32 - Karma: 10
pretty sweet 1 thumbs up
Apr 2 2006 3:48AM
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*Four*Zero*Six*
Posts: 1479 - Karma: 10
i second that shading shows depth and try to use different colors for lighting.
Apr 2 2006 7:59AM
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