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Song for my band

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Campeador
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Tell me what you think. It's about this asshole kid from guatemala who tries to pick fights with the kids at my high school but still plays with toys like a little kid. Its by our new rock band Renbuck and the Friens. The song is about 2 minutes and 30 second long.

Guatemala


You came to America and we don’t want you here
You have your hair slicked back and you look like a queer
Look at yourself you fool, no wonder you have no friends
Guatemala is where you belong so don’t come back again

All the kids laugh cause you don’t know how to read
A bullet in your back is what you really need
But you’re a square and I don’t even care,
Leave before I rip out your fucking gelled hair

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Cause Guatemala is where you belong!
Get the fuck outta here! (All)
You fucking little boy...
Playing with your toys...
Guatemala is where you belong!
Get the fuck outta here! (All)

(Guitar Solo)

You came to America and we don’t want you here
You have your hair slicked back and you look like a queer
What are you going to do when La Migra finds you?
I’ll come a cut you up with my whole fucking crew

Chorus
Cause Guatemala is where you belong!
Get the fuck outta here! (All)
You fucking little boy...
Playing with your toys...
Guatemala is where you belong!
Get the fuck outta here! (All)

What the hell? You have a Hindu brother?
You’re a piece of shit with a whore for a mother
But this is obvious cause she needs money for her little boys
So she can buy you your fucking toys!!!

Chorus
Cause Guatemala is where you belong!
Get the fuck outta here! (All)
You fucking little boy...
Playing with your toys...
Guatemala is where you belong!
Get the fuck outta here! (All)


Get the fuck outta here! (All)
END OF SONG
Feb 8 2006 11:39PM
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nickmcnutt
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wow, id buy that...
Feb 8 2006 11:40PM
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GotamaBCshredder
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rhyme schemes are lame, and the songs lyrics have a lame way of presenting what you think. Thats kinda what a 10 year old withy a foul mouth would say. And fuck is rather distastful in most songs.
Feb 8 2006 11:52PM
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Campeador
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trust, the whole song could be just saying fuck the whole time and it still would not be distateful. I sing the words fast so the words have to string together and present an angry but clear message. hahahaha.
Feb 8 2006 11:54PM
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SteezePatrol
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jesus christ hate much...wtf is with Guatemalla, what did they ever do to you.

You should be sued
Feb 9 2006 1:56AM
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SquawJibber
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that song is fucked up
Feb 9 2006 2:25AM
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Campeador
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its not guatemala you fool. it about someone from guatemala.
Feb 9 2006 10:56PM
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brogilvie
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With a passion and drive for GOOD music.... you are likely to go far....
Feb 9 2006 10:59PM
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Campeador
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haha after reading it over again i realize its pretty fucked up but i like it as it is so i'm not going to change it.
Feb 9 2006 11:01PM
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RKF
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maybe we have been doing the wrong thing all these years.. maybe if we just told immigrants that we didnt want them politely they would understand and leave/stop comming,
but above that they probably come because they know how angry we get about them and think its funny that we get so angry, i bet if we just ignored them they would get bored of it and all go home.
Feb 9 2006 11:06PM
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mutescratch
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write lyrics about something that has a meaning...
Feb 10 2006 9:28AM
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holyDINOSAURS
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that was possibly the worst song ive ever read.
Feb 10 2006 1:39PM
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Potatoes
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you wrote a song about a kid in your school. woooow.

if he bothers you that much beeeat his ass down
Feb 10 2006 1:40PM
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Campeador
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hmmm i'm not the first to write a song about another person...

and if you tell me you'd face someone twice as big as you, you'd be lying.
Feb 10 2006 7:03PM
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Campeador
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write something better then bitch.
Feb 10 2006 7:06PM
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SteezePatrol
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he is in fact ina band
Feb 10 2006 7:20PM
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JEA
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JEA
Feb 10 2006 8:03PM
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illwillcox
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right on man.
guatamalens are hairy.

i say if they are called something that is not american, they shouldn't belong here
Feb 10 2006 8:07PM
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Forum*
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So what inspired you to write this?
Feb 10 2006 8:18PM
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Desjardins
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yeah the A,A,B,B is kind of childish
Feb 10 2006 8:45PM
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salomonskiier12
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make it reggae
Feb 10 2006 9:42PM
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Deafboy
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im not a fan of your lyrics.
Feb 10 2006 11:16PM
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TheHamburglar
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bump
Dec 9 2016 6:54PM
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TheHamburglar
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bump again cause I want to know if your band got a record deal or not
Dec 14 2016 4:28PM
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TheHamburglar
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CampeadorTell me what you think. It's about this asshole kid from guatemala who tries to pick fights with the kids at my high school but still plays with toys like a little kid. Its by our new rock band Renbuck and the Friens. The song is about 2 minutes and 30 second long.

Guatemala


You came to America and we don’t want you here
You have your hair slicked back and you look like a queer
Look at yourself you fool, no wonder you have no friends
Guatemala is where you belong so don’t come back again

All the kids laugh cause you don’t know how to read
A bullet in your back is what you really need
But you’re a square and I don’t even care,
Leave before I rip out your fucking gelled hair

Chorus
Cause Guatemala is where you belong!
Get the fuck outta here! (All)
You fucking little boy...
Playing with your toys...
Guatemala is where you belong!
Get the fuck outta here! (All)

(Guitar Solo)

You came to America and we don’t want you here
You have your hair slicked back and you look like a queer
What are you going to do when La Migra finds you?
I’ll come a cut you up with my whole fucking crew

Chorus
Cause Guatemala is where you belong!
Get the fuck outta here! (All)
You fucking little boy...
Playing with your toys...
Guatemala is where you belong!
Get the fuck outta here! (All)

What the hell? You have a Hindu brother?
You’re a piece of shit with a whore for a mother
But this is obvious cause she needs money for her little boys
So she can buy you your fucking toys!!!

Chorus
Cause Guatemala is where you belong!
Get the fuck outta here! (All)
You fucking little boy...
Playing with your toys...
Guatemala is where you belong!
Get the fuck outta here! (All)


Get the fuck outta here! (All)
END OF SONG


I'm srs bout that record deal bro, you have a way with words that just touches the soul. Are you the lead guitarist? Damn, that solo ripped, bro!
Dec 15 2016 11:00AM
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intifada
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This would've been a great punk song that many a white supremacist and neo nazi could stomp around to. Good job.
Dec 15 2016 12:42PM
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intifada
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But for real this racism really runs deep with you huh?
Dec 15 2016 12:43PM
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MF_GOON
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can't tell if this is a joke or not but OP sounds like a dick.
Dec 15 2016 9:03PM
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MF_GOON
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Sam_Califfcan't tell if this is a joke or not but OP sounds like a dick.


did not see that this was from 2006 until a fat minute ago
Dec 15 2016 9:04PM
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MF_GOON
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Sam_Califfcan't tell if this is a joke or not but OP sounds like a dick.


did not see that this was from 2006 until a fat minute ago
Dec 15 2016 9:04PM
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Campeador
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TheHamburglarbump again cause I want to know if your band got a record deal or not


I don't even need to ask about yours.

At least we share in common that both of our "bands" were jokes, just in your case I'm not sure you were in on it.
Dec 16 2016 1:13PM
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TheHamburglar
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CampeadorI don't even need to ask about yours.

At least we share in common that both of our "bands" were jokes, just in your case I'm not sure you were in on it.


Ah, don't be so modest, man, your music really has potential! If you ever make it out to LA and are looking for someone to produce and record your music, I've got access to studios! Hit me up!

Renbuck and the Friens are the next big thing!
Dec 16 2016 1:24PM
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Campeador
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TheHamburglarRenbuck and the Friens



You are so fucking stupid.

You've just been outwitted by a 17 year-old from a decade ago. Sounds about right.
Dec 16 2016 1:29PM
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TheHamburglar
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CampeadorYou are so fucking stupid.

You've just been outwitted by a 17 year-old from a decade ago. Sounds about right.


The nice folks at the Independent Artist Program loved your lyrics so much, they have offered to fly you and the Friens out to America, land of the free, to record your album!

Call me and we'll get you set up! 1-800-854-7771
Dec 16 2016 1:40PM
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Campeador
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TheHamburglarThe nice folks at the Independent Artist Program loved your lyrics so much, they have offered to fly you and the Friens out to America, land of the free, to record your album!

Call me and we'll get you set up! 1-800-854-7771



The sad part is, I'd probably have more success than your poor band.

Are you still doing Battle of the Bands in front of a handful of high school kids? Or did you just give up and find solace in smoking yourself retarded day after day?
Dec 16 2016 1:48PM
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TheHamburglar
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"You came to America and we don’t want you here
You have your hair slicked back and you look like a queer
What are you going to do when La Migra finds you?
I’ll come a cut you up with my whole fucking crew"

It's lines like these that represent the purely poetic subtleties of the English language. I LOVE what you did with the rhyme schemes, so unpredictable!

Seriously though, you had a room full of people laughing at you a few minutes ago. KK g2g work now, keep in touch so we can set dates to record!
Dec 16 2016 2:04PM
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Campeador
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TheHamburglar"You came to America and we don’t want you here
You have your hair slicked back and you look like a queer
What are you going to do when La Migra finds you?
I’ll come a cut you up with my whole fucking crew"

It's lines like these that represent the purely poetic subtleties of the English language. I LOVE what you did with the rhyme schemes, so unpredictable!

Seriously though, you had a room full of people laughing at you a few minutes ago. KK g2g work now, keep in touch so we can set dates to record!



Only an absolute moron could get trolled this badly.
Dec 16 2016 3:01PM
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Campeador
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TheHamburglarSeriously though, you had a room full of people laughing at you a few minutes ago.


Are you talking about man-boobs and those other two guys you play "music" with?

Nice haircut by the way.



You should thank me for being one of only 23 views your poor band was able to generate.
Dec 16 2016 3:25PM
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TheHamburglar
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Hey bro, everyone likes your song so much, we're gonna go ahead and submit it for copyright along with some other new artists' songs.

And no, I'm not kidding :)
Dec 16 2016 4:00PM
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doublecup
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Fuck Guatemala
Dec 16 2016 4:06PM
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