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Skiing Poem for English "Dreadlock Frost"
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This is about this guy i saw the other weekend that was super hardcore. We had to write a couplet poem, so here it is
Dreadlock Frost
The flakes tumble from the bleak grey sky,
The birds no longer chirp or cry.
Buckles click and snap in place,
Snowflakes burn his ungroomed face.
Duct taped gloves jam on frosted fingers,
The aroma of weed, still lingers
The chairs creak around the gate,
The cue moves slowly, still he waits.
The chair greets the back of his knees,
A cigarette, a cough, a quiet sneeze.
A lone lock covered in ice,
His tam from Jamaica now infested with lice.
The soft mountain snow awaits his 203’s,
The dreadlocked man is finally set free.
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i like it but my hair is long and dirty blond so if you could rewrite it and make the changes that would be great
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haha i love that.....his gloves still smell like weed, hell yeah yer good post up some more poems...
peace
**$FREE$KIER$**
~Baker~
***Powder Kings***
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if i was black, i would so have dreadlocks
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doesnt have to stop u though it should!!
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good writing, you should add more just for your fans here on NS.
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haha good shit man, i enjoyed it.
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im usually not one for poetry, but i enjoyed reading that alot, very deep, intelectual, true
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fuck if i wrote weed or somethgn about a cigarette in a poem id get suspended or soemthg gay like that
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some kid in my la class tried and he got written up and asd
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