Replying to Short Film Critique. +k

I'd love to get a Critique on a short film I made today, I've yet to do titles and a final grade, but before I do I'd love to get ripped apart.

The guidelines were 1 min or less, 2 characters, No Dialogue, 2 Locations Max.

Password: Carrots

Colour Silent - Rough Edit, with Audio from Upped Ante Media on Vimeo.