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Editing Critique?

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Childstar.
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Be cruel, Be picky, Pick apart my editing and grading.

TOPP October Drift Day | FTN from Upped Ante Media on Vimeo.



If your mean enough +K will be awarded.

Some shots I took, and some a friend took, so I know the shots will vary a bit.
Oct 26 2013 2:59PM
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Childstar.
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Really nothin?
Oct 27 2013 8:11PM
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Cincher
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The biggest one is that your video isn't working.
Oct 27 2013 8:31PM
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Childstar.
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It works for me on firefox.
Oct 27 2013 11:45PM
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j.benziger
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I noticed at the end there was a lot of black space with no music until it ended, probably a very easy fix. Another thing that annoyed me was your b roll/ friends camera work, because that what stood out to me the most. It looked exposed differently, white balanced differently and looked very handheld at some times.I don't know if you got rid of his shots you would have a enough for a well rounded edit, so maybe next time.

Oct 28 2013 11:12AM
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Cincher
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Hmm, it appears to be playing for me now.

My apologies, it was not working when I tried earlier.

As for the actual video, I thought it was pretty good. Good shots, good editing, just overall a good production.
Oct 28 2013 5:52PM
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