I don't often offer my work up for critiques, as I have yet to feel confident enough with a final product in a while.. However, I've been trying out some new ideas and want to see what people think, so I'm looking to get some insight.
Please, if you feel inclined, offer an extremely critical critique. I am not looking for a "that was terrible" or "that was great" - please give explanations on your points, so I can look at improving and and moving forward.
First, a few acknowledgments on my behalf about the video:
- Major audio issues in the talking portion - extreme peaking and left pan
- The track is intense - likewise is the piece as a whole
- The video was created for a party outfit "Rage Gloucester" to promote their upcoming events. This was their first real event and the turnout was relatively small (to work with from a video standpoint).
The video:
Thanks for watching, and I look forward to your insight!
-Chase