Replying to Critique my....thing

I don't really know what to call this, but basically I want you all to tear it apart, give me hate, love advice, anything that will make me better.

I'll say that I am aware of the shaky tripod shots, I'll be investing in a new head soon which will correct that issue, and I didn't do any color correction or grading.

Here we go:

The Fall from Evan Aiudi on Vimeo.

Filmed using a Nikon D3100 W/ Kit lens, edited in Adobe Premiere CS5.

Filmed and edited by Evan Aiudi.