Replying to Was bored, made an edit. criticism?

i wanted to just edit something before i start makin ski edits again...i realize im not that good at skating, and the editing isnt insane because of the lack of footy. im just asking how the filming and flow of the edit is, if its enjoyable to watch overall. thanks for good constructive criticism!

<object width="400" height="300"><param name="allowfullscreen" value="true" /><param name="allowscriptaccess" value="always" /><param name="movie" value="http://vimeo.com/moogaloop.swf?clip_id=7634334&server=vimeo.com&show_title=1&show_byline=1&show_portrait=0&color=&fullscreen=1" /><embed src="http://vimeo.com/moogaloop.swf?clip_id=7634334&server=vimeo.com&show_title=1&show_byline=1&show_portrait=0&color=&fullscreen=1" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" allowfullscreen="true" allowscriptaccess="always" width="400" height="300"></embed></object><p><a href="http://vimeo.com/7634334">lazy sunday!</a> from <a href="http://vimeo.com/user373452">nick meilleur</a> on <a href="http://vimeo.com">Vimeo</a>.</p>

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