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cultrara
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tell me what you think, positive or negative critique

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Nov 6 2009 11:01PM
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TOK
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dude these are all super sick I really like the first one I think i might try and draw something like that thanks for the inspiration!

do you ever color your sketches? you could use photoshop for some of them and it would turn out really nice. keep drawing!
Nov 6 2009 11:17PM
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Hansel.
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1. no
2. really good
3. golf club needs work, more realistic, needs to look like its actually swinging through the cup
Nov 6 2009 11:53PM
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cultrara
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thanks guys
Nov 7 2009 9:18AM
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AgentOrange11
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really dude, because i think one is the best out of all of them
Nov 7 2009 9:24AM
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Hansel.
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brutal honesty here, i like the right side, lots of talent there. but what the hell is the other side? to me it looks like half a light bulb
Nov 7 2009 12:35PM
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cultrara
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click on it
Nov 7 2009 12:50PM
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cultrara
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its supposed to be a sequence in his mind and the light bulb is the outline of his skull

Nov 7 2009 12:56PM
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Jelo
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All of them were dope, LOVED the first one, good thinking
Nov 7 2009 1:43PM
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DirtYStylE
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1. right side is sick but the left needs more work

2. drawings are good but when he is on the rail looks like he is gona slide off. Its just not that realistic he needs to stomp the rail and skis need to be parallel to the ground.

3. cups are dope by the golf club needs to look like its being swung. If thats what you were going for
Nov 7 2009 3:07PM
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hawaiiansteeze
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the lest side is supposed to be like his brain and hes thinking about skiing?  showing the sequence,  my favorite out of all of them.
Nov 7 2009 3:09PM
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butteredpretzel
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i love the first one, really creative
Nov 7 2009 3:45PM
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large.moose
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first one shows great concept but i think that the level of detail in the left side of the face should be complementary to the rest of the picture as a whole. (try and use some textures and detailing on the left side of the face)
Nov 7 2009 4:30PM
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cultrara
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should i make the left side be a detailed skull?
Nov 7 2009 4:38PM
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.frenchy
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 insane man. keep it up
Nov 7 2009 6:02PM
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T-Holt
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1.  Good idea, but execution is meh.  The right side is dope, and I understand what you're trying to do with the left, I just think it needs more work.  Maybe make the inner skull more detailed.  Like add eye cavities and things like that.  Also, continue the outline of the helmet in order to have more continuity.

2.  Meh, It's okay.  Make the skis perpendicular to the ground and it'll be a lot sicker.

3.  Pretty sick overall.  WOrk on the golf club to make it more realistic.  Also, try to make it look more like it's swinging.  Idk how to do that. but try to work it.
Nov 7 2009 7:29PM
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speightphoto
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the concept of all of them is really good..
1st one the skier is so sick but i don't know about the other half.
2nd one is the best i think. although for some reason the black one looks a little wierd. idk what it is.
3rd one is cool but yeah the golf club doesn't look that real
Nov 8 2009 12:37AM
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SHD
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Wow! I couldn't understand the first one at all before I read the comments, but it's sick!! If you make the skull more detailed so we can actually see it's a skull, it will be dope!

The second one is good, but if you want to draw the black man the way you do, you need more of an overview (looking more from the sky). It would require some more work, but it would give more possibilities with details, and look cooler ;)

The third one is really cool with how you show the cup breaking, but I couldn't see what caused it before reading the comments... Having the club really touching one of the pieces, and be closer to the cups might help. And you can do something as simple as drawing some lines (in a way i don't know) of the path the club had until the point it is.

You got talent dude! Post up some more if you get some! Coloring might be cool too ;)
Nov 8 2009 1:18AM
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SHD
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And sorry for me english...
Nov 8 2009 1:20AM
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KevinK.
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damn that 3rd one is soooo sick the first two r sick tho how old r u?
Nov 13 2009 10:30PM
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thisandthatfilms
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golf one is sick
Nov 15 2009 1:26AM
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kaPOW
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your a beast at drawing and they're all sick but I'd have to agree that the first is definately the sickest by far
Nov 15 2009 1:39AM
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-fungus-
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the one with the guy hittin the rail is pretty legit, i'm not really feelin the first one and the golf club one looks kinda weird, if u fix the club itself it would look way better... it doesn't really look like its moving or anything, maybe switch up the angle perhaps
Nov 15 2009 12:48PM
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ManOnTheMoon
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The First one is sick, great shading on the goggles. Idk about the left side, could use some more clarification to waht it is. i dont think the other two are very impressive though.
Nov 15 2009 3:44PM
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Nick_P
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the first one is different, but its alright..second one is real tight, many of ways you could make it better thru practice..and the third one is good too
Nov 15 2009 5:58PM
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Wild-Willis
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it took me a while to get the first one but now that i see it thats sick.  maybe elaborate on the left side of it to explain what it is more.  the golf one is sick too, and maybe make it so it looks like the club is moving cus it just looks like it is sitting there.  all in all nice job
Nov 16 2009 10:07PM
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lahnabonny
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Work on shading and tonal variates throughout. For the first one, the face needs to look more realistic - the idea of it is sweet though. The second one is good but just make sure its really clear, like the lines and shape of the figure. For the third one, it needs to look more believable. The golf club looks awkward, and if it already smashed through the cups it should be in front of them, not behind still. Also try working into the negative space of the background to make it part of the drawing.
Nov 16 2009 10:36PM
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Leafman
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first one is dope but needs shading work as people have pointed out, the second one is a good idea but try to make it solid black and white so you can see lighting on his pants and jackets etc to give it more 3d shape... the third is just weird
Nov 16 2009 11:15PM
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Fry077
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liked the first one, second one, idont know, third one it doesnt really look like the club hit the cups?? idunno just me. For the first one only think i think that needs work is maybe some shadowing on the guys cheek bones, maybe some eyes or closed eyes (thad be cool) and better nose to match the right side, cuz it looks like a troll on the left with no eyes or cheeks and a skier on the right lol
Nov 17 2009 1:25PM
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lilwhiz165
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dude! those are all bom especially the first one
Nov 17 2009 1:46PM
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cultrara
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the left side was supposed to be an outline of his skull. im going to make it alot more detailed so you can tell
Nov 17 2009 2:55PM
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